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I would seriously rethink writing an intersex character, given the way you currently talk about intersex people. You've called intersex variations "disorders", referred to intersex people's genitals as "abnormal", and seem to have done most of your research by looking at pathologising medical information, which is problematic given how frequently intersex people are seriously traumatised by the medical establishment. Try reading up on the subject using resources from intersex-led organisations and researchers, such as OII.