Effects of prolonged mild hypothermia
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Hi! First post here, hope I'm doing it right :)
I have two characters who are sheltering in an abandoned building in below-freezing temperatures (exact temperature is kept vague). They have various supplies, such as blankets and tools to make a fire, but neither came prepared to deal with weather this cold. One of them, we can call them character A, is already dealing with the effects of accidentally falling into a frozen lake before they both finally found the building to take shelter in. For plot reasons, they're going to have to stay in this building for about three days before they can finally move to somewhere properly warm.
Character A is definitely going to be suffering from hypothermia, but a lot of what I've found describing the effects of hypothermia seems to fall into one of two categories: either, it describes what happens when you get it and then immediately get treatment, or it describes how you can die horribly (and quickly!) from it. Maybe I'm missing something, but I'm having trouble extrapolating what hypothermia looks like when you're able to treat it a little bit, but not well. Character A will receive some warming from the blankets and the fire, and while this will keep them from dying, I don't think they're going to be having a great time (ultimately they're still stuck in a cold environment!). I can guess at what symptoms they'll be experiencing (lots of shivering! sluggishness/tiredness/confusion! etc!) but if anyone has any more medically-informed guesses or suggestions, I'd love to hear them!
A few more details that are probably worth mentioning:
- The POV of this chapter is Character B, who'll be caring for Character A as best they can (and without much medical knowledge), so I'm more curious about what symptoms they'd notice rather than how A would experience them.
- Ideally, Character A is pretty incapacitated throughout this whole thing. I think they would be conscious, but I want them to be in bad enough shape that they won't be doing a lot of moving around or talking.
- Even after they've moved into a warmer climate, The Plot will necessitate both characters doing a lot of walking/running around. What lingering effects might Character A experience from their hypothermia bout?
I have two characters who are sheltering in an abandoned building in below-freezing temperatures (exact temperature is kept vague). They have various supplies, such as blankets and tools to make a fire, but neither came prepared to deal with weather this cold. One of them, we can call them character A, is already dealing with the effects of accidentally falling into a frozen lake before they both finally found the building to take shelter in. For plot reasons, they're going to have to stay in this building for about three days before they can finally move to somewhere properly warm.
Character A is definitely going to be suffering from hypothermia, but a lot of what I've found describing the effects of hypothermia seems to fall into one of two categories: either, it describes what happens when you get it and then immediately get treatment, or it describes how you can die horribly (and quickly!) from it. Maybe I'm missing something, but I'm having trouble extrapolating what hypothermia looks like when you're able to treat it a little bit, but not well. Character A will receive some warming from the blankets and the fire, and while this will keep them from dying, I don't think they're going to be having a great time (ultimately they're still stuck in a cold environment!). I can guess at what symptoms they'll be experiencing (lots of shivering! sluggishness/tiredness/confusion! etc!) but if anyone has any more medically-informed guesses or suggestions, I'd love to hear them!
A few more details that are probably worth mentioning:
- The POV of this chapter is Character B, who'll be caring for Character A as best they can (and without much medical knowledge), so I'm more curious about what symptoms they'd notice rather than how A would experience them.
- Ideally, Character A is pretty incapacitated throughout this whole thing. I think they would be conscious, but I want them to be in bad enough shape that they won't be doing a lot of moving around or talking.
- Even after they've moved into a warmer climate, The Plot will necessitate both characters doing a lot of walking/running around. What lingering effects might Character A experience from their hypothermia bout?
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Date: 2024-12-04 02:22 pm (UTC)Sensible. Keep doing that!
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Date: 2024-12-05 05:06 pm (UTC)(It usually takes longer than 1 night if you're not drunk, but people get stupid and/or unlucky all the time. Fun fact: one of the common symptoms of advancing hypothermia is that you get stupid.)
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Date: 2024-12-04 03:31 pm (UTC)You might be able to tone that down if they barely got wet (i.e. a big puddle rather than a lake) but if it was a good, soaking wet in icy water, even with quickly getting out of the wet clothes, walking/running will be hard.
You could slow Character A down by having them in a large puddle *and* they hit their head so that they have a concussion. That would slow them down for a bit but allow you to have them move better in your three days.
Good luck!
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Date: 2024-12-05 11:13 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-05 05:22 pm (UTC)Relatedly, I spent an hour standing still outside yesterday in 36F (doing a neighborhood event), and by the end I was miserable. It wasn't below freezing! It wasn't even windy! I had long johns and a puffy coat and a knitted hat and half-gloves and even pockets. My fingers HURT from the cold, and I was shivering constantly by the time I went inside. It wears you down, cold like that. It requires a lot of calories -- ideally hot calories -- to keep your body and brain moving in cold like that.
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Date: 2024-12-04 03:47 pm (UTC)This one (different medical journal) might discuss the topic in a way relevant to your question - I have to run and can't look further, but perhaps someone else has a better lead:
Frostbite
Source: The British Medical Journal , Jan. 12, 1974, Vol. 1, No. 5897 (Jan. 12, 1974), pp.
67-70
Published by: BMJ
Stable URL: https://www.jstor.org/stable/25422470
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Date: 2024-12-04 04:13 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-04 07:16 pm (UTC)https://genxpose.blogspot.com/2018/08/down-frozen-river-of-death.html
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Date: 2024-12-05 12:53 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-05 11:15 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-04 04:28 pm (UTC)If A fell in a lake, both A and B need to take their clothes off and get in the blankets together. This is standard first-aid practice. The only thing warm enough to keep A alive is B. I can't say this strongly enough. It is an emergency. Clothes off, now! Both into the blankets. Unless both A and B have no clue.
The fire is to help keep B warm, dry off A's clothes, and make hot water. Even if they don't have coffee, tea, or cocoa, make some hot water and get it in both of them. Hot food is good, but hot liquid is best. Making hot water takes a lot of time and fuel. It is a constant preoccupation. The most efficient way to burn wood is to make a tiny fireplace out of bricks or rocks. Make it tall, narrow, and not very deep. Have a couple handfuls of sticks burning in it and keep feeding it. Balance one or two pots on top. Hope you got pots. Mugs could do in a pinch.
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Date: 2024-12-04 10:57 pm (UTC)Huh. I’ve had the same thing happen with heat exhaustion.
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Date: 2024-12-04 11:11 pm (UTC)For best results, they should be face-to face, or rather abdomen-to-abdomen, that will transfer the most heat fastest. A's hands should be between them. A brick or stone can be *lightly* warmed in the fire, WRAPPED, and put at A's feet.
Put something warm&dry on A's head! this is no time to let the head stick out.
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Date: 2024-12-05 03:37 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-05 11:24 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-05 04:54 pm (UTC)One guy in particular described how he was out hiking/camping with a male friend, they both got unexpectedly soaked on a chilly day, and stripped down to their underpants to huddle together inside conjoined sleeping bags inside a tent. They were shivering, and banged into each other! They were both clammy! They never got comfortable enough to sleep, and just had to lie there all night hoping things wouldn't get worse! All the unwanted intimacies of being forced to share space unexpectedly, and so physically miserable that it was just a matter of enduring till morning and they could pack up and leave. He mentioned that they both went straight to a doctor on returning to town.
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Date: 2024-12-15 03:41 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-04 11:23 pm (UTC)But A is in a much more serious condition than I was unless B knows enough first aid to warm them up properly.
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Date: 2024-12-05 05:45 pm (UTC)Ed Viesturs has written two different memoirs, and personally witnessed a ton of distressed high-altitude climbers. James Tabor's Forever on the Mountain, about 7 guys who died on Denali, goes into considerable detail about how people slowly die of cold, partly by being unable to replace the calories burned by shivering.
I had hypothermia and...
Date: 2024-12-13 03:04 pm (UTC)Re: I had hypothermia and...
Date: 2024-12-15 03:37 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2024-12-29 01:38 am (UTC)Hi! I've got more medically informed guesses/suggestions, I have EMS/first responder training and I know things about wilderness survival! I know I'm coming in with thoughts like a month after you posted this, hope it's still helpful. Asterisk that all of this is just for writing and I left some stuff out because it ended up being so long:
Falling in water does kind of put A in a "dies horribly" camp, getting dunked in the cold is actually a really big deal. To survive that you'll need A to get warm and dry really fast, and you'll probably want to keep in mind what they're wearing too. Wool and some synthetics preserve heat when wet, cotton/linen leeches heat.
Just looking up symptoms of hypothermia online, it lines up fine with what I've got. I do want to specifically highlight confusion, though. B might end up doing a lot to try to keep them from unwrapping themselves from blankets, trying to leave, etc. It doesn't matter if they can't really go anywhere, it won't stop them from trying, trust me. Relatedly, the level of incapacitated you want is good!
B needs to keep them warm, layer blankets over and under them so they aren't on a cold surface, share body heat, use heat packs (someone else mentioned homemade ones out of bricks) just... anything. A lot of people mentioned skin-to-skin rewarming, but if they have warm, dry clothes available, I'd put those on A once B has to leave do things like light a fire. You can still include it, they'll probably just want to be dressed at some point, since it's extended and eventually that's warmer. A might start getting sick later on in the three days. B will need to make sure A is hydrated. The symptoms you guessed are good, if it's just being fended off! It'll probably start worse and improve slightly once they get a little warmer, but not much.
Everyone who said frostbite is right! It's important to keep A's limbs warm. The body prioritizes heat and circulation to the core, so frostbite will be an ongoing risk, especially since anything frostbitten and rewarmed might freeze again, which is really bad. I checked what's just online for signs of frostbite and it's good for writing. Frostbitten tissue also gets damaged really easily, between the frostbite itself and the fact that the person can't feel it, that's why you shouldn't rub/massage it.
Honestly A would need a bit to recover from just this even without any lingering effects, it's a lot of stress on the body. Something like pneumonia is a lingering effect I found that'd be the most practical for most stories, but pneumonia's a long recovery time, and I get it with The Plot. A really common injury with people who fall through ice is also a broken leg if you wanted something totally different. Frostbite would also for sure cause effects while it heals, probably similar to burns, or even permanent damage/needing a fingertip/whatnot to be amputated.
Anyway, on my last awful note, everyone else has said solid things! I tried not to rehash anything anyone else said. The only thing I want to say that you really shouldn't do is add a concussion, since that got pitched, that'll make everything worse. I know this is very long, but I hope something in it helps. If you have more questions, I will either answer them or try to find answers!
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Date: 2025-05-01 09:08 am (UTC)For additional context, an “extremely” physically fit younger adult wearing typical swim attire can survive in 80 degree Fahrenheit water (tropical) for a MAXIMUM of three days before they die of hypothermia. This is extended for about another day if they’re wearing a life jacket, as it keeps more of the torso out of the water.
I do maritime search and rescue and there was a group of divers in 75 degree (still tropical area) water for about 3.5 hours, wearing 3-5mm wetsuits and floating huddled together, buoyant from their dive BCDs. They were all shivering, miserable, couldn’t feel their toes and fingers, dehydrated (less of a hypothermia issue), sunburned, massive headaches, and I believe three of them were vomiting.
Hypothermia is no joke!!!! For plot reasons, I’d recommend that the shelter they find is better than freezing. B should be able to exist near the fire or wrapped in a blanket and be chilly but alright if you want A to survive.